Thursday, October 22, 2015

Page 175 Questions 1-4

1.       One of Heather's main points is the evolution is actually creating a sad environment around us where electronics rule our attention. The American dream is no longer safe living and a nice cozy house to come home too. It has evolved to much more than that. Children often are sat in front of TV’s and in her opinion they “should be exposed to the wonders of the globe from an early age.”
2.       Her authoritative figure comes out of her shell when delivering the “reality check” through her writing. The way she has written her argument clearly shows she has some experience with this or has seen it up front.
3.       She appeals to the audience right off the bat, by stating her opinion and reasons, they are relatable and easy to see around us every day. Her strong tasteful opinion on how rapidly the average childhood has changed is a great way to open a readers eyes to the problem. And it could even draw them to be concerned for their own future.

4.       I have never heard of Mad Men, it is out of my scope as teenager, maybe when I am older it will cycle back and I will be able to watch it, other than that I do not really appeal to TV anymore.

Thursday, October 15, 2015

looking at analysis

I analyzed the differences between ticket master, and tickets now dot com. It seems very apparent to me that Ticketmaster is the wider used website. I can assume this just by their display being a very wide variety. The main picture on the screen is a Sea-hawk action shot. So instantly I can assume that game ticket sales are popular here. Although they advertise concerts and plays etc., ticket now really intrigues me more musically. If I were looking for concert tickets (something I’d more likely buy) I would be somewhat annoyed if the only real options in front of me were tickets to sporting events. I really like the layout of ticket now, because it immediately shows a list of common artists. Popular genres, and most importantly bands on tour with tickets available. There is a large picture of Taylor Swift as their greeting image. This website gives off the overall vibe of music. If it just so happens that they sell other types of tickets, they are doing a poor job at advertising so. But it is pretty clear that their focus is music. Whereas Ticketmaster seems to be up front and center about what they make big business on.

Think about your own use of anaysis

If I should wait around until the last second, or leave early for class.
This has had a big effect on how much stress is in my life. I do not really like the idea of having a bunch of extra time.
I tested out leaving my house at a few different times until I found the time where I was not in a rush and was not late. (Enough time to park)
Where I want to move to
This has affected all of my relationships with people around me. My brother now lives in Vancouver so I could stay kind of local and go there. My parents are okay with me going wherever, but all my friends and feelings are here.
Information I keep in mind is the fact that I want to leave. I have considered incorporating Vancouver into my community college plan until I venture off elsewhere. This decision is not yet made because it is a very big one..
What to eat for breakfast
The only effect this really has had is the fact that I have to adjust. My parents no longer wake up before me to make breakfast they are gone. In doing so I am now an independent breakfast packer.
Often times I think nothing is better than something that doesn’t sound good. But then I also think I will regret the pit in my stomach in the late afternoon once it’s too late. (I compromised and now pack for when I want it)
What to spend money on
My brain is constantly turning; doing math, or considering how to get the bag for my buck. Usually that ends up in me spending my money on a ton of random things though.
I always tell myself not to buy anything, but always do, this is because I try to manage myself because I know its un enjoyable to go days without any money left. But I always end up in that position anyways.

Analytical decisions 

Final Essay

Literacy Narrative

Literacy, rhetoric, and annotating have all been a part of my life since a very young age. Growing up, my parents or people around me have always corrected the way I speak into it being the right one.  They placed books in front of me since I was born, but of course they read to me until I could read on my own. Starting from early in my years in elementary school we were taught to edit and revise our own work. We always were taught to put our own “voice” into what we wrote. All of these aspects that were a part of my life from a young age has had a very positive affect on the way I can execute those ‘simple’ things now. Childhood should be the happiest time of a kid’s life. For me; I can say it was, I was fearless. One of the big factors that lead to that could have been the fact that I have always have had an amazing older brother. He has always made a point to keep me safe and proudly would teach me things he knew, and we would play together. Whether it be the school I attended or where I grew up or the way I was raised or maybe the confidence my parents instilled in me, I do not know. But I am grateful for many small details that stuck with me. Although I may have loved reading as kid, these days English as a subject, especially reading comprehension now is a struggle for me. With that being said, it really makes me appreciate the happy memories of a time where I truly loved reading and could appreciate that bond I shared in doing so, with my parents.
  Even since I was a baby, there are vivid memories I still reminisce, cuddled in my bed as a kid. My decorated raggedy Ann and Andy sheets and pillows. I remember, lying in bed with my father looking down at the end of the bed to see our wiggling toes, the cuddly warmth we shared just lying and reading together is enough to fill my heart, to this day. As we read back and forth to each other and he helped me with the words I didn’t know. These days, the time I spent as a child, especially being able to remember being read to, and being taught to read by my father is priceless to me. Everything from the strong scent of his cologne, to his deep but excited voice I remember, but now see and appreciate from a far as he interacts with any little kid. He is and always has been a great business man. Always on the go. Wakes up before the sun and often home late if at all. Ever since I was a kid my dad always went out of town on business. Being able to think about the small, but amazing things I do remember about him when he was around to spend time with me, mean all the more to me now.
 Dr. Seuss is what my parents heavily introduced to me when I first began to read. It was and always has been popular. From then I recall the books that consisted of small words, but pictures of things as well. Most book page pictures, to plots, and even phrases from those stories I still remember to this day. I sometimes think to myself that could have been a factor in why I was able to read so well starting at a young age. Possibly, rhyming could have put more words in front of my face that must have built a better mind capacity to more alike words, faster. Or the fact that I was great at relating any picture to any word. Green Eggs and Ham could often be found before my eyes. My parents didn’t wait long to teach me to read, but when they did it didn’t take much more than them sitting back and watching my development before their eyes. All I can hope is that they were able to appreciate and take credit for themselves. I turned out to be quite the reader from then on. That being said, I was able to read chapter books by the time I touched foot into my first half-day kindergarten class. My teacher was impressed, and I was very proud. I can even remember an instance where my mother, teacher, and I were all sitting in the classroom after hours. I remember showing her how well I could read, I remember my mom with her soft, on looking eyes and her corky unique self, she could then just sit back and watch me excel at something she taught me, both of us proud as ever. By that time The Magic Tree-house was my new cup of tea. I could truck on through one of those books in anywhere from three short days, to just two! At that time, including all the way through elementary school, I enjoyed reading most times that the task of it was in front of me.
Back then my take on reading was very different than it is now. I used to read a few grade levels above my own, whereas now I wish I could take English classes below my own skill level. No matter the content of the class or book now a days I particularly cannot spark interest, let alone skill in the subject. What once felt accustomed to me is now in the past. What I once excelled in, I now feel like I am constantly struggling with. Looking back on this, it’s hard for me not to ask the question of "what happened." Often I think, but mostly appreciate the positive affect my parents had on the experiences in my childhood. Anywhere from the way they were able to make me excited about reading, the influence they had on my mellow behavior, and the way I was raised to talk and speak correctly. Sometimes, I concur that my parent having less and less of an influence on what I was learning as the years went on, made me less interested. Going into middle school one could agree that it would be easy to not want to read when all I ever had to read was History or English textbooks anymore.

Starting from a very young age, my parents have always given me what I needed and more. As a child, they knew, and cared enough to put time and energy into me, and a skill that would eventually do me very well once I was grown. I had a very proud, big brother to show me each and every rope of life. He took pride in teaching me everything he learned. Or the few things he knew.  Anything and everything from the literacy I the way I speak, to the way I was always taught to correct myself. And or my mistakes. From a young age they pushed me to read more and in the end, only has benefited me. I was always taught to pick myself up, try again and make it better.  I always will cherish the sweetest memories with my parents and brother, reading truck books I SPY and what not.  Even someone who now hates reading may have a time in their life where the memories they shared in doing so can top everything else. One big thing I have learned is that you have to do what you’re passionate about, because a little love and passion towards something can take you a long ways. Whether it being there has been a lack of that in my life recently in this subject, or the love I was able to share over reading as a child being the difference on my stance then and now, I’m not sure I know. Although I am okay with not knowing, I am even more okay with the way that I look back at the things I remember, and play through each vivid detail in my head with a smile on my face every time. Nothing can replace those memories with family. Having a big brother and a loving family was one of the biggest blessings I could have had growing up. And it is something I can appreciate even now, and something I will cherish forever.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Taking Stock of Your Writing

1.       The moral of my story is that things can easily change. You can have a great relationship or set of memories with a specific person that’s in your life. But experiences can change. And nobody knows why. All you have to do is learn to appreciate the great times you did have. You will cherish those forever.
2.        My audience is my classmates and my teacher. Whoever will go on my blog and read my narrative. I tried to get them to see my story how it was through my eyes.
3.       The feedback I often get consists of my need to re arrange my words. Sometimes I forget to add things, or repeat things too much. And I never see it until I read through a few times or a peer can point it out to me.
4.        What was interesting was that this was easier to flow out of my brain than I thought it would be. 1,200- 1,500 words was not as hard as I feared it would be. In fact I only had to sit down a few times, gather my thoughts and input them into the prompt. Most of it I just had to put in descriptions.

5.       I wonder what you will be looking for in them. I think my story is supposed to be sweet, but I am unsure if it lacks content or visual imagery. 

potential ideas

The simple and sweet way my parents taught me how to read together. The wonderful smells and vivid pictures I can still remember about the time when i learned and accomplished at a stunning pace. Another big thing i could talk about would be the struggle I have with English as a subject; to this day. I have never had a great relationship with an English teacher and been able to say, wow they really challenged the best out of me. In reality I can look back and remember teachers nagging, sometimes repeatedly asking us as a whole class to do things that we never wanted too. That was the environment of every English class I've had from grades 6-12. Nothing or nobody has stood out, or been able to spark interest in reading and writing for me, the way I used to get excited for those things around the time I was five. I used to get excited when I had writing homework (I always had to write my name as my kindergarten homework) and you could always find my nose in a book. No one can take credit for the way my childhood was structured more than my parents. And I am sure, no one can appreciate them doing that more than I do.

Literacy narrative RD



Literacy Narrative

Literacy, rhetoric, and annotating have all been a part of my life since a very young age. Growing up, my parents or people around me have always corrected the way I speak into it being the right one.  They placed books in front of me since I was born, but of course they read to me until I could read to them. Starting from early in my years in elementary school we were taught to edit and revise our own work. We always we taught to put our own “voice” into what we write. All of these aspects that were a part of my life from a young age has had a very positive affect on the way I can execute those ‘simple’ things now. Childhood should be the happiest time of a kid’s life. For me; I can say it was, I was fearless. Whether it be the school I attended or where I grew up or the way I was raised or maybe the confidence my parents instilled in me, I do not know. But I am grateful for many small details that stick with me. Although I may have loved reading as kid, these days English as a subject, epically reading comprehension now is a struggle for me. With that being said, it really makes me appreciate the happy memories of a time where I truly loved reading and could appreciate that bond I shared in doing so, with my parents.
  Ever since I was a baby, there are vivid memories I still reminisce, cuddled in my bed as a kid. I remember, lying in bed with my father looking down at the end of the bed to see our wiggling toes. As we read back and forth to each other as he helps me with the words I didn’t know. These days, the time I spent as a child, especially being able to remember being read too, and being taught to read by my father is priceless to me. Everything from the strong scent of his cologne, to his deep but excited voice I remember, but now see and appreciate from a far as he interacts with any little kid. He is and always has been a great business man. Always on the go. Wakes up before the sun and often home late if at all. Even since I was a kid my dad always went out of town on business. Being able to think about the small, but amazing things I do remember about him when he was around to spend time with me, mean all the more to me now.
 Dr. Seuss is what my parents heavily introduced to me when I first began to read. It was and always has been popular. From then I recall the books that consisted of small words, but pictures of things as well. Most book page pictures, to plots, and even phrases from those stories I still remember to this day. I sometimes think to myself that could have been a factor in why I was able to read so well starting at a young age. Possibly, rhyming could have put more words in front of my face that must have built a better mind capacity to more alike words, faster. Or the fact that I was great at relating any picture to any word. Green Eggs and Ham could often be found before my eyes. My parents didn’t wait long to teach me to read, but when they did it didn’t take much more than them sitting back and watching my development before their eyes. All I can hope is that they were able to appreciate and take credit for themselves. I turned out to be quite the reader from then on. That being said, I was able to read chapter books by the time I touched foot into my first half-day kindergarten class. My teacher was impressed, and I was very proud. I can even remember an instance where my mother, teacher, and I were all sitting in the classroom after hours. I remember showing her how well I could read, I remember my mom, and sitting back and watching me excel at something she taught me, both of us proud as ever. By that time The Magic Tree-house was my new cup of tea. I could truck on through one of those books in anywhere from three short days, to just two! At that time, including all the way through elementary school, I enjoyed reading most times that the task of it was in front of me.
Back then my take on reading was very different than it is now. I used to read a few grade levels above my own, rather now I wish I could take English classes below my own skill level. No matter the content of the class or book now a days I particularly cannot spark interest, let alone skill in the subject. What once felt accustomed to me is now in the past. What I once excelled in, I now feel like I am constantly struggling with. Looking back on this, it’s hard for me not to ask the question of "what happened." Often I think, but mostly appreciate the positive affect my parents had on the experiences in my childhood. Anywhere from the way they were able to make me excited about reading, the influence they had on my mellow behavior and the way I was raised to talk and speak correctly. Sometimes I concur that my parent having less and less of an influence on what I was learning as the years went on, made me less interested. Going into middle school one could agree that it would be easy to not want to read when all I ever had to read was history or English textbooks anymore.
Starting from a very young age, my parents have always given me what I need and more. As a child, they knew, and cared enough to put time and energy into me, and a skill that would eventually do me very well once I was grown. I had a very proud, big brother to show me each and every rope of life. He took pride in teaching me everything he learned. Or the few things he knew.  Anything and everything from the literacy I the way I speak, to the way I was always taught to correct myself. And or my mistakes. I was always taught to pick myself up, try again and make it better.  I always will cherish the sweetest memories with my parents and brother, reading truck books  I SPY and what not. One big thing I have learned is that you have to do what you’re passionate about, because a little love and passion towards something can take you a long ways. Weather it being there has been a lack of that in my life recently in this subject, or the love I was able to share over reading as a child being the difference on my stance then and now, I’m not sure I know. Although I am okay with not knowing, I am even more okay with the way that I look back at the things I remember, and play through each vivid detail in my head with a smile on my face every time. Nothing can replace those memories with family. Having a big brother and a loving family was one of the biggest blessings I could have had growing up. And it is something I can appreciate even now, and something I will cherish forever.