Peer review

1. There is a lack of question here being considered. This essay focus' on the comparison between two common brands of men's razors.
2. The opening catches the reader by using exaggerated and expressive words to attract the reader and give enough background about the topic (shaving) for the reader to be able to follow right along.
3. Personally i think the subject could be described more based on the audience, because it covers a lot of content in only a few sentences. There is no harm in putting more detail into the two most important paragraphs of this essay.
4. From this analysis it really helps me compare to someone who's writing is unlike mine. I respect your organization of thoughts, and its very easy to follow. Hopefully reading this will help me to accomplish the same sort of concept in my own writing.
5. The thesis is not very clear to me.
6. There is lots of support following each detail, an that is very helpful for the audience. Very easy to follow.
7. Sources are successfully cited, each picture has the source in the caption, very easy to follow.
8. Did not really acknowledge a counter argument or a comparison, more or what is in relation and how they compete over the same market. how they relate not differ
9. The tone is strait forward and instructional. You get a lot of good info from this paper.
10. The design of your paper is great, each ad is clear and easy to read. and your overall essay is well put together and organized.
11. Good transitions. Everything is smooth
12. Style is very mature, fitting for a comparative college English analysis essay.
13. The conclusion to me seems a little bit cut off, i would elaborate and put more content to it. a little TOO strait forward
14. The title is clever! subtle but it makes a lot of sense in relation to the topic of this essay.