Wednesday, November 4, 2015

self essay analysis



1.       Thesis: Advertisements strategically target women in these ads by offering products that promise to save their valued time.
2.       Evidence to support: I explain every ad and its pint, along with explaining what the ad itself says. With that I should add a bit more evidence to the support of my thesis.
3.       I need to site my pictures, and look into the background of the ads ad their sponsors.
4.       My opening begins by describing a memory that we all have. This situation helps us take a closer look at the lives our mothers lived when or while we have depended on them. I should begin to provide more background info earlier on?
5.       Conclusion: Throughout the years few things have changed. As you can see from these ads, different age periods can easily coincide with the way that choose to approach the women who would buy or use these hair products. Although many things have changed, big name brands have found a way to successfully attract the consumer. Women with busy lives have been around for decades. But women with busy lives and little to no time for their own hair, has successfully opened the window to what we now call a very large, very successful hair and hair product industry.  

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