Taking Stock part 2

1. While analyzing the text, I placed a lot of helpful descriptions through the essay. Along with explaining to the audience the message that is being uncovered within each specific ad.
2. When i was drafting I kind of just went on a tangent and spat out a lot of random ideas. Usually you would draft and outline first, but i am choosing to do a reverse outline. To organize the ideas i have drafted and elaborate more on the ads that in my opinion were briefly summarized.
3. My analysis is not very organized yet. I'm going to write a reverse outline to do so. By making a chart and writing down topics with my supporting details and then sorting them.
4. I provided some evidence but more elaboration needs to be done.
5. I think that I wrote my thesis especially well. it connects back to it through the evidence and support I show in my ads, throughout the entire text.
6. A lot can be improved. Most in the way that my thoughts can be better grouped together. And  I'm in need of a good conclusion.
7. I implemented pictures of the ads in my analysis. I was hoping this would really help the audience to visualize the examples that I was describing, even better.
8. The other readers responses to my first draft were shocking to me. They thought a lot higher of the paper I wrote than I personally did because I know I can write a more organized essay than this first draft.
9. Next time, depending on how well i can write a reversed outline, I would probably begin again by throwing out ideas. Pre-writing is helpful, but it is a technique I have been using for a long time.
10. I am pleased with my analysis thus far.. It does not peak my interest in the slimy ways advertisers have learned to get under our skin and implemented into our daily lives, though.
11. I will transfer the reversed outline strategy because it seems to be a great way to organize ideas. Let alone it is nice to be able to use a different technique to my own writing.