1.
The moral of my story is that things can easily
change. You can have a great relationship or set of memories with a specific
person that’s in your life. But experiences can change. And nobody knows why.
All you have to do is learn to appreciate the great times you did have. You
will cherish those forever.
2.
My audience
is my classmates and my teacher. Whoever will go on my blog and read my
narrative. I tried to get them to see my story how it was through my eyes.
3.
The feedback I often get consists of my need to
re arrange my words. Sometimes I forget to add things, or repeat things too
much. And I never see it until I read through a few times or a peer can point
it out to me.
4.
What was
interesting was that this was easier to flow out of my brain than I thought it
would be. 1,200- 1,500 words was not as hard as I feared it would be. In fact I
only had to sit down a few times, gather my thoughts and input them into the prompt.
Most of it I just had to put in descriptions.
5.
I wonder what you will be looking for in them. I
think my story is supposed to be sweet, but I am unsure if it lacks content or
visual imagery.
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